05 December 2007

All your base are belong to us: Politico Redux


Wanted: Copyeditor

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8 comments:

Matt said...

Looks fine as is to me.

Orville said...

Just so the text is clear, "Cheney, who has been widely criticized for overly optimistic — and sometime flat wrong — projections in the past, sounded as confident as ever that the Bush administration will achieve its objectives in Iraq."

Matt said...

ah I missed the 'sometime'

Pete said...

It sould read, "Cheney, who in the past has been criticized for overly optimistic and sometimes flat wrong projections, is a fat piece of crap.

Reynolds said...

The hyphen-usage is also fucked

Matthew said...

Cheney, who once shot a friend in the face, shot a friend in the face while wasted.

Orville said...

I don't mean this post as a political discussion. Think what you will about Cheney. My issue is with the grammar of the piece, which is shitty.

kyle said...

oh yeh? than why is grammar misspelled as "grammer" in the name of the screenshot, asso? riddle me that, guido.