Documenting the spectacular failure of individuals and institutions to function at acceptable levels.
Looks fine as is to me.
Just so the text is clear, "Cheney, who has been widely criticized for overly optimistic — and sometime flat wrong — projections in the past, sounded as confident as ever that the Bush administration will achieve its objectives in Iraq."
ah I missed the 'sometime'
It sould read, "Cheney, who in the past has been criticized for overly optimistic and sometimes flat wrong projections, is a fat piece of crap.
The hyphen-usage is also fucked
Cheney, who once shot a friend in the face, shot a friend in the face while wasted.
I don't mean this post as a political discussion. Think what you will about Cheney. My issue is with the grammar of the piece, which is shitty.
oh yeh? than why is grammar misspelled as "grammer" in the name of the screenshot, asso? riddle me that, guido.
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